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Post by penny82ling on May 16, 2013 20:14:20 GMT -5
Thank you.
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Post by Biskit Sprinkles on May 16, 2013 20:31:22 GMT -5
That's so cool! You have a lot great ideas.  You should definately write that Fisher Biskit story. As for the twins, it depends. It would be cool if they were both boys, but one boy would work too. If the Biskits have a crush on them/him, and there was only one boy, there could be some tension between the girls. And if the boy liked Blythe, like you said on another thread, then there would be even more tension. Makes me wonder about the female twin though, if there is just one boy. |
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Post by penny82ling on May 16, 2013 20:36:03 GMT -5
The reason I want at least one of the twins to be a boy, is because I want one of the twins to hit on Blythe, be rejected, and be obcessed with obtaining her because he can't stand being rejected, which kind of what happened with Blythe and the Biskits only with offer of friendship. But taking to a much more extreme. These twins are not good people, they are vicious, one of the main purposes is to make the Biskits look good by comparisson.
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Post by Biskit Sprinkles on May 16, 2013 20:38:56 GMT -5
That's an even better reason to make the twins a boy and a girl. Do you have any ideas what the girl is like though?
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Post by penny82ling on May 16, 2013 20:47:13 GMT -5
That's an even better reason to make the twins a boy and a girl. Do you have any ideas what the girl is like though? If the second twin is a girl, she is a "real" mean girl. She will do mean things to people just for fun, unprovoked. The Biskits might have pity reasons for trying to ruin Blythe's fashion show, but at least they had motives as pity as they may be, this girl don't need no reason, she just gets off on humilating people. And they have a entitled personality, to a point that this guy would have no problem try to physical force himself on Blythe, and his sister would approve of that. |
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Post by Russell on May 16, 2013 21:20:16 GMT -5
I like those ideas and concepts for the twins.
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Post by Ha ha ha! on May 17, 2013 6:40:39 GMT -5
What's the story about the twins going to be called I like the idea for the story.
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Post by penny82ling on May 17, 2013 6:59:45 GMT -5
I don't know yet, the concept is them trying to buy out the block LPS is located, but one thing I am not good at, and you guys I could use your help and I will credit you if I use your ideas, is names of OCs.
Give me a name for the evil corporate tycoon, and his twin son and daughter, yup I decided to make the second twin a girl, so help me out. Something that means ruthless or evil, but not too obvious. Or something that opposite of Biskit.
I might want to start this story first which will be a multy chapter story before I do the Fisher Biskit flashback story, I might want to have the villain in this story appear in the flashback story, so I want to establish him first in present time.
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Post by Russell on May 17, 2013 10:13:27 GMT -5
I'll have to think about that.
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Post by Biskit Sprinkles on May 17, 2013 11:26:43 GMT -5
Well I did some thinking and came up with an idea for what the name of the twins could be. If you don't like it, that's cool. These ones are more for symbolism rather than sound.
Anyway, maybe they could be called Devin (boy) and Devlynn (girl). The first syllable for their name is also the first syllable to the word "devil", which from your character descriptions, is what their personalities are like. It also sounds similar to each other, like Whittany and Brittany, but instead of the last syllable being the same (tany), it's the first one (dev). It's my way of implying the twins are similar to the Biskits, but also opposite in a way.
Now, to their last name, Yeldon. It is spelled with the same amount of letters as "Biskit", but it is still an opposite. The letters in this name, especially the first and last, are roughly opposite to the letters in the name "Biskit". Also, the name doesn't sound too obviously evil.
So, basically, Devin and Devlynn Yeldon. Still haven't thought of the parent's name yet.
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Post by Ha ha ha! on May 17, 2013 12:30:58 GMT -5
Oh ok that's kind of cool
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Post by penny82ling on May 17, 2013 12:43:06 GMT -5
Thanks Biskits Sprinkles, I really like them, and I will keep your ideas in mind.
Anywho, I have decided that the evil coprorate tycoon will have three henchmen, and I already have their names, named after three characters on a certain tv show, I haven't decided if they are going to human or animals, if so I already know what animals they are going to be if they are animals.
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Post by Russell on May 17, 2013 17:34:18 GMT -5
That must of taken some time, Biskit. I love the names! I was thinking Daniel and Danielle. Them again yours is more.. evil sounding.
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Post by Biskit Sprinkles on May 17, 2013 20:24:41 GMT -5
Thanks, guys! ;D I think you should make them animals. A villain pet would be so awesome, and maybe they could be spies for the other two pet shops or something.  |
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Post by penny82ling on May 17, 2013 20:31:46 GMT -5
Well it depends what direction the story will go, maybe I need human henchmen maybe I don't, but yeah all think being equal I would love to animal villains, if they are not human, I would make them hounds, Mr. Burns has his hounds, I figure the villain would also have hounds. There names are Seth, Roman, and Dean, like I said named after characters on a tv show, I just told you the names, guess what show? The fact they I would like to make them hounds should be a hint.
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